What do you think of this poem?

i really like this. it does a good job of summing up what it feels like when you get it a fight with your best friend, like everything you've ever told each other and everything you've ever stood for is gone. i think the ending is great, i wouldn't change it. the only thing is on the line that says "And nobody can aid", it reads awkward, and it seems like you only placed it there for the rhyme scheme. I would replace it with something like "And nobody can take the blame."